The Pact - The Epic Begins...

The Stablehouse climbed three stories, a narrow building just twenty feet shy from touching the top of the double outer wall that surrounded the castle's north flank. Lights shone in the top floor windows and a few others at ground level, where the horses were kept. Will hurried across the dark stones. The soft tap of his shoes against the cobbles echoed in the empty Square. In the middle, where the ground sloped down toward the sewer drains, the statue of Amarr the Barbarian cast a long shadow. Will passed into it and stopped. He heard voices.

Cover for The Pact, Graeme Brown, releases May 2013

Two men spoke in hushed tones, but their words carried when the wind wasn't gusting.

"It's that hag, I tell ya," came one voice. "She's roundin' them up, preparing one of her big spells, she is. I heards there's a sacrifice comin', and she means to raise the dead."

"It's that hag, I tell ya," came one voice. "She's roundin' them up, preparing one of her big spells, she is. I heards there's a sacrifice comin', and she means to raise the dead."

"Don't be stupid, Roth." Will recognized the raspy tone at once. It belonged to Mern, the whitesmith, whose half-slashed throat had never fully healed. Will squinted, but couldn't see where the voices came from, other than realizing they drifted over from the dark, walled yard outside Hellistead's Tavern.

"I'll not have ya callin' me stupid. Oh no. I know what this is about an'hoo. You're just afraids, justs protectin' yurself. Ya know whatcha got in it, ands I don't blame you for bitin' your tongue."

"Quiet, you hay-brained crofter," Mern spat. "Tonight's not a night to whisper about such treacheries. The Lord Ham will cut your tongue out, and the world'll be a better place for it if he does."

"Old Cren will put it back, if he do, but I says he'd best act quick, or he'll be lacking for the parts as fits him proper. The night's black, Mern, and it's gettin' blacker yet."

There was a hollow clatter, then sharp hisses. The man who spoke improperly cursed in words that would have made Grandma Mae gasp then Will heard quick footsteps and a series of clunks. He looked back to the castle, to where father gathered his fighters, then the other way, to the Stablehouse. If father's in trouble, I have to warn him. Will knew his words wouldn't be taken seriously, though.

He began to run across the stone expanse. Fort Lesterall won't fall. Mern's a wicked man, and whoever that other one is, he's got no wits. Cren's just an old woman who lives in the woods. She probably doesn't even exist.

The side door to the Stablehouse opened as Will arrived, revealing a long labyrinth of stalls lit by rows of hanging lanterns. Jak peeked from behind the door, and Will slipped inside. When the older boy closed it, the dangerous night seemed far away. They were alone, Jak peering at Will, a curry comb still clasped in his hand. He was broad-limbed and of average height, with tousled hair the color of wet earth and eyes like onyx. As usual, he smelled of straw and horse manure, but that only made him all the more inviting.

Jak grinned. "I thought you'd hurry over after the feast proper. Too many clouds tonight, though. I'm afraid we won't be spying Hell's Cap, but I've another surprise for you. Found it myself, last night."

"We won't be going to the groves, Jak." Will lowered his voice. "The Unborns are going to attack. Alter Dun showed the Red Token. That means the Unborns have challenged us. The Pact is broken. Even as we speak, my father's gathering an army."

"Of course he is." Will turned toward the metal spiral stair. Barrik, a wiry man with salt-and-pepper hair and a bushy moustache, bent his impressive height as he descended from the second floor serving quarters. "I've a hundred retainers to see to and that's lots of horseshit, my little prince. A good thing they've taken to the barracks. I'm full, and there's a thousand more coming, twenty companies marching under you uncle's banner knight, Telliken. If we hold the night, then there will be others, and we'll feed the Unborns hell like they haven't seen in centuries. But if what I've heard's true, then they have hell to feed us first, before we can draw breath."

Will gaped at the Master of Stables then shook his head fiercely. "Fort Lesterall cannot fall."

Barrik grunted, though it sounded like a laugh. He picked up a pail and carried it to a nearby stall. "I wish I believed that, lad, but this world's not run on luck, I'm afraid. A man forges his own blade then learns to use it, or he gets cut by everyone around him. This world's a fierce battlefield, a bitch with a thousand teeth."

"We can fight with them," Jak insisted. "I've practiced with the sword you gave me lots of times in the groves. I'm not bad."

"You would be with armor on." Barrik came out of the stall with a pail full of black dung. He looked at Will, at Jak, his expression grave. "No, you boys have another errand...



Enter the world of Will Lesterall, a boy who's grown up in the safety of his father's castle. Tales of the outside world ruled by warring kings and creatures of nightmare have never seemed a threat, yet on the night celebrating the two hundredth year of the sacred Pact that has kept Fort Lesterall safe, a secret intrigue ripens, and in the course of a few hours Will is confronted with a choice greater than he can comprehend. Join an unlikely hero as destiny pulls him into the middle of an ancient conflict between fallen gods and ambitious women, one that demands blood, both holy and wicked, and the power of an ancient fire bound in steel. As swords clash below a watching wood, hope and betrayal war as fiercely as fear and valour. Whether he lives of dies, Will Lesterall will never be the same.


The Pact is a novella, similar in tone to George R. R. Martin's Song of Ice and Fire. Originally intended to be a short story, The Pact originated as an exercise in writing from an outline, and an attempt to write something shorter and unrelated to the larger epic I had been submitting to agents for several months. Completeing The Pact was a significant achievement for me, not just because it became my first publication, but because in writing it I found my voice. Contrasting it with my previous manuscript, The Flight to Molluin's Tower, for example, I realized I had finally broken away from lazy, clunky prose; when I wrote The Pact, I had a greater sense of direction, and so had no qualms about taking my time. This allowed me to go deep, to get the words just right - a skill I apply to my work now, and every day.

Shortly after finishing The Pact, I attended Keycon 2012, where I met Ellen, who owns Champagne Books. We chatted briefly, and she told me she was intrigued by the premise of The Blood, The Sword and The Shadow. Shortly afterward, Paul Lucas informed me that he wasn't interested in representing my longer manuscript, so I went home and tried to make some much-needed edits for submission to Burst Books, the fantasy / sci-fi division of Champagne. I only made it to chapter three, though, before deciding that the manuscript needed to be rewritten, and as this was a monstrous project, I dropped Ellen a line, asking if she was interested in The Pact. She was, so I quickly (but carefully) polished it up then sent my query.

One month later, I was staring at my first publishing contract. Co-incidentally, this lined up with my last shift as a barista at Starbucks (I was checking my email on my final half hour break). Over the year that followed, I learned a lot about being an author, and established several blogs and writing / research routines to help me continue forward with writing goals. Not only did I learn a lot about the editing process as The Pact passed through four revision cycles, but I also had the opportunity in that year to become an editor at Champagne Books.

What is most exciting, however, is that The Pact, originally intended to be an unrelated story, has now evolved into the beginning of the same epic I set aside. Outlining the sequel, A Thousand Roads, then following through with the process of writing its draft, allowed me time to fit the rest of the stories together. For those interested in where the tale that begins with Will Lesterall is going, be sure to read about the larger epic.

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